Sunday, September 22, 2013

The Dispatched Date won!

My entry, The Dispatched Date,  into the 1,000 word challenge won! Very exciting and fun to wake up on a Sunday morning to such great news.

And I especially loved the kind comments from the 3 judges:

I wanted more after every sentence. Your descriptions and dialogue were exquisite! The starting and stopping with confusion in their conversation felt so real. "I haven't, -hey, it's none of you're business..." I love it!

What can I say. I’m a total sucker for a reunion story and I loved the touches of humour.

I really like your characters , especially your super smart take charge alpha male hero. Nice funny, feisty, and natural dialogue.

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